SwivelScotty's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[edd dance]

Best to submit this as a gif not so much an animation.

doompiss responds:

OHH thanks ill keep that in mind for next time

[my First animation(that I made myself)]

Good effort but read into the animators survival kit by Richard Williams so you can get a more fluid look to your animation. I'm not necessarily calling it bad, just more of it needs more work plus more things needs to go on to make it make sense in the animation.

masonicon responds:

Thanks for your constructive Criticisms

I can at least consider reading Richard Williams' Animators Survival Kit later

[I Aint Got No iPhone]

Good nod to Flipnote and the creator of the animation.

I know it's old but might as well say one thing about it. If you ever were going to remake this in the future.. when he kills himself I would make it last longer. This is Newgrounds and you're allowed to make animations with more darker themes because there's so much more things even darker then this, so don't be afraid of doing that.

jamesuniverse responds:

i will definitely remake it, and probably make the suicide scene a little longer. the reason it was so short is because back when this was made, it was originally intended for Youtube.

[Super Dan 2: The Invisible Man]

Well animated and funny but maybe add a little more detail on the backgrounds then just green and a dark version of green, or unless that's the point and I'm missing it lol.

Also when things change to night the buildings become a little bit blue.

Overall nice job.

DogProductions responds:

Thank you so much!, we´ll improve some things for episode so it will be better :D

[Chris Chan Coom]

Finally, another animation about Chris. Love how you made it completely with MS Paint to really give that shitty drawing feel Chris is known to have. Also, reminds me of Spazkidin3ds Adventures of Sonichu series, is that the inspiration here or I'm being crazy?

Anyways, good work but wish it was longer.

KyzoBo responds:

Aww thank u, yes the sonichu animated series from spazkidin3ds was my inspiration XD I love the humor and animation style they did for it and I just had to make my own animations based off it. ms paint is kinda hard though :D glad u enjoyed :D

[I need feedback]

Really cool design wise and overall how it's animated but could benefit with some audio.

Strijed responds:

I got a version with audio I'll post it today

[LongBeachGriffy - When P*dos Argue (Animated Version]

Funny but minimal animation. Kinda more of a slideshow them animated.

KidActivistt47 responds:

appreciate the criticism but at the same time who tf cares, this is a repost, years old, decent 2d animation quality and still slaps

[Another Flash (Flash Movie EP)]

Didn't expect to enjoy signs dancing but here we are.

I liked the tunes for each one it sounded nice but why would you mask it with AI? I get wanting it to sound good but I don't think AI can be used in that sense.
Theres softwares that can give you a better result then using artificial intelligence doing the work but overrall I chuckled a little when watching because I'm a stupid idiot that thinks everything is funny..
Neat little collection of previous works to dip people's toes into your work which is nice.
Hoping to see more from you in the coming months.

carbonlad responds:

>why would you mask it with AI?

I sound like I cant sing, haha. thx tho.

[(No sound) Witchtrip meme (Macromedia Flash 8)]

Loving this but what's killing me is how 'no sound' is part of the title. I understand putting this here if you want to get noticed, believe me, i wanna get noticed too but if it doesn't have sound then what's the point of posting this? If this were a silent movie then, okay it gets the pass but there's clearly audio attached to it.
So, I'm leaving this review as three stars solely for the animation alone.

redmaggot2507 responds:

I'm glad you checked it out. The reason why Iʼm removing the sound is copyrighted audio, because I had experience when my animations were removed because of this. The point is why I'm posting this because I still spent my efforts to do all this and I like my works, I leave the videos with audio in the links if anyone is interested