SwivelScotty's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Emoji Combat - PILOT]

Cool but what would make this more appealing is colors and cooler composition shots for action scenes to make it feel more like an action show.

[Long Time Coming]

Very promising animation but the only drawback I see is the audio is very low even at the lowest volume you'd think there's no audio.. perhaps fix that and resubmit.

[(Mostly) Unfinished Animation Reel]

Nice little jumble of animations I can tell you wre putting your all into them.

[my First animation(that I made myself)]

Good effort but read into the animators survival kit by Richard Williams so you can get a more fluid look to your animation. I'm not necessarily calling it bad, just more of it needs more work plus more things needs to go on to make it make sense in the animation.

masonicon responds:

Thanks for your constructive Criticisms

I can at least consider reading Richard Williams' Animators Survival Kit later

[I Aint Got No iPhone]

Good nod to Flipnote and the creator of the animation.

I know it's old but might as well say one thing about it. If you ever were going to remake this in the future.. when he kills himself I would make it last longer. This is Newgrounds and you're allowed to make animations with more darker themes because there's so much more things even darker then this, so don't be afraid of doing that.

jamesuniverse responds:

i will definitely remake it, and probably make the suicide scene a little longer. the reason it was so short is because back when this was made, it was originally intended for Youtube.

[Domino vs Psylocke (WIP)]

Love the composition but audio would've made this feel more action packed.
Otherwise, great animation.

Might I add.. such a 2000s style animation straight from Newgrounds which I like about it too.

[Super Dan 2: The Invisible Man]

Well animated and funny but maybe add a little more detail on the backgrounds then just green and a dark version of green, or unless that's the point and I'm missing it lol.

Also when things change to night the buildings become a little bit blue.

Overall nice job.

DogProductions responds:

Thank you so much!, we´ll improve some things for episode so it will be better :D

[Алайт моуеш]

Pointless, not even animated. All it really is just the head spins. That's something you'd post as a gif, not so much as an animation for Newgrounds.